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Not knife nor bludgeon
Have shattered my broken heart
But a simple word.
Had this haiku scribbled on the back of a paper in my coat pocket. Decided to upload it. :>
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punx-chan89 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lovely poem
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escapethefate741 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010
Its so true and fits me perfectly
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ActsofArt Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
this is well crafted. very deep. It just gets right to you.
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Ayaka-Woulfe Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
Thank you very much! :heart:
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RemiroQuai Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
I think I would have loved to see the actual note. :D Maybe even the handwriting would have emphasized the feelings you had at that moment.

I really do like this put into the structure of a haiku. Nicely done.
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Ayaka-Woulfe Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
Hurr, my feelings at the moment? I recall I was drinking Dr.Pepper in a tea cup with my pinky up and watching the rest of my troupe play Mafia. Not really sure what I was feeling then. |D;;

I looked for it so I could show you but uh, can't find the thing anywhere. It'd really suck if I threw it away after uploading it. But really, it's such a small piece of paper in a messy room... xD

Thank you so much! :heart:
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RemiroQuai Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Haha, well your welcome either way :D
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Ayaka-Woulfe Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
:D
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m-i-n-k-k Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
Yeah yeah, sometimes words hurt more than physical harm, we all know that. But I love how this was crafted, how you've given that common notion a structure that makes it resonate. At least that's how I felt it. Great work.

And I wonder, what is the word? "No," comes to my mind :)
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Ayaka-Woulfe Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
Thank you so much! :heart:

Ahaha, I'm not really sure myself, the words for the haiku just kinda came to me. O:
No is really a strong word though, in some cases.
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icee-eyez Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010  Student General Artist
nice :)
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Ayaka-Woulfe Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010
Thank you! :heart:
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icee-eyez Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010  Student General Artist
i love how its so true...
someone can physically hurt you so many times but what hurts worst is almost always their words..
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Ayaka-Woulfe Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
Yeah. :c

I read in a book once that said; "They might kill us, but it is much better then a knife inside of us".
Words hurt you inside and stay longer then physical wounds. :c
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icee-eyez Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010  Student General Artist
yeah, you can say that again.
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AnnamaeTezuka Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Sticks and stones mayn't break my bones but words will always hurt me? This came out well and is rather poignant.
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Ayaka-Woulfe Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010
Yes, I think that was the overall idea! :'D
Thank you so much! :heart:
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AnnamaeTezuka Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :D
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Ayaka-Woulfe Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010
:heart:
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rosaquatica Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010
Thats pretty deep!
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Ayaka-Woulfe Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010
Thank you! > U < <333
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rosaquatica Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010
Your most welcome!!:heart:
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